2011安徽考试书面表达试题及答案

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Last Monday,on account of the exam was up,all my classmates fervently discussed where to play for spring outing. Finally,they chosen three sites to be voted such as amusement park,seashore and mountain. Consequently,they reached a unanimous agreement for mountain.Last Sunday,agreeable weather and warm sun greeted us and all of us got up earlier than usual to prepare equip for mountain climbing. At about seven o'clock,we all set feet in the mountain starting our challenging journey. Getting to the hilltop,we immediately found rubbishes all over the ground,which bothering our pleasure. However, an optimistic classmate offered that we can pretend to be volunteers clearing up the area in passing. We all say "yes" with one mouth.Needles to say, we do the good garbage classification without any complain. Then, we all felt it was a meaningful day.