高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

in the past,my hometown have been surrounded by trees,there is a lot of fishes in the river,houses very simple and narrowed roads,people have not enough money,but they hardworking.Now,an increasing number of high houses in the street and a lot of cars have been drived,industry developed leds to environment which was worse,trees were reduced,fish was disappeared,we are impelled to manage pollute