拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
The Social Networks Different people have different ideas about using of social networks. Some people believe that these social networks bring benefits to the young students. Others regard it. If I am to have a choice, I will not hesitate to choose the former. The social networks benefits us in many ways. First of all, we can benefit from making friends online by Qzones, weibo and web chats. So we can communicate with friends and share our colorful life. Secondly, the social networks can be a immense information channels that people can learn about all the news from the world instantly. So we just use our smart phone or computer, all news will swarm into our minds. What is more, the social networks is a perfect place for us to share our mood and extending individuality. Because I guess people will be a true man on the Internet. That is no doubt that some people could find the special themselves and be indulged in it. So, the social networks as a virtual space can reduce our pressure. In a word, the use of social networks change our life and we can benefit from it.
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