2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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As we all know,computer is one of the most great inventions to our people,actually,it took different influences in our daily life. we,the man,who created computer,and who use it to do many things,which among these things contained advantages and disadvantages，for instance，some persons through it to do bad hare many how