Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As a saying goes that:knowledge is power.While in today,knowledge may represent high payment and low unemployment rate.You may wonder how i can draw this conclusion. From the chart,it is evident that higher education is likely to have more chance to be hired than low education.In addition,people who get higher education are tend to earn more than others.For instance,doctoral degree earn 1,551.whereas,people who less than high school diploma merely earn 451.What a big difference between them. Reflect on this phenomenon,we can learn a lot from it.Firstly,on the one hand,it is of great vital for us to improve our degree based on these stastics.On the other hand,it was high time that we practiced skills combined with knowledge.Secondly,we should reflect whether it is essential to only improve our degree.As the financial global,employers attach more importance on ability instead of grades.In a result,we should spare no effort to study more and take part in more activities .