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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；文中拼写错误比较多，同时请注意积累词汇量；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
the chart show the relation of education and wages. with the knowledge increasing, we can get the higher degree, so that we can get more wages. the chart shows less than high school diploma has hightese unemployment rate.the high school diploma and some college,no degree also higher than the average. the associate degree though lower than average,the median weeekly earnings lower than average. in bachelor's degree unemployment rate decreases,the earnings increase. so we should learn more when we in universy
