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Is it wise to make friends online Nowadays,most ordinary families can afford a computer,so the internet plays a much more important role in our daily life and millions of people make friends online which has aroused a heated discussion,In my opinion,I do not agree to make friends online because there are so many disadvantages about it. To begin with,making friends online is not safe because you did not know what kind of person you are talking to even how old are they.For example,there are so many girls who were cheated were hurt or even dead.What a serious lesson!In addition,It is not good for us to make friends in our real life if you pay all attention on making friends in imagine.You will become more absorbed in your life and ignore others.There is another factor should be taken into consideration,We are the star of hope of our family and our country so time should be fully used,While strangers will take you a lot of time which you should spend on the study. Taking those factors into consideration,we are better not to make friends online for safety,friends in reality and our study,While for internet,we can search some useful information or see a movie instead.
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