2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足。

Is it wise to make friends online Nowadays,most ordinary families can afford a computer,so the internet plays a much more important role in our daily life and millions of people make friends online which has aroused a heated discussion,In my opinion,I do not agree to make friends online because there are so many disadvantages about it. To begin with,making friends online is not safe because you did not know what kind of person you are talking to or even how old are they.For example,there are so many girls who were cheated were hurt or even dead when meeting online friends.What a serious lesson for all of us!In addition,It is not good for us to make friends in our real life if you pay all attention on making friends in imagine.You will become more absorbed in your life and ignore others.Last but not least,We are students and we have much homework to do, so time should be fully used,While strangers will take us a lot of time which we should spend on the study. Taking those factors into consideration,we are better not to make friends online for safety,friends in reality and our study,While for internet,we can search some useful information or see a movie instead.