托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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A majority of people begin to realize that snap judgment plays a important role in our lives. When asked people agree or disagree with that snap judgment can never be trusted? people will give varies answers based on the individual value system. On balance, I can't agree withe the statement for the following reasons. To begin with, I concede that the snap judgment without a carefully consideration can mislead us when we do some important decision. In this situation, we may do some wrong choice and led a bad consequence. For example, many people like to swim no matter they know or doesn't know how to swim. When they come to a river, they may see the water before they swim in it. If they can see the floor, they will make a decision that they can swim here because they judge the river is not very deep. However, many people drowning for the snap judgement. On the other hand, the river may have another big animals like the crocodile or other predators. So the sap judgement will cause many dangerous. In this sense, the snap judgment should not be trusted. However, compelling these cases may sound, they can not overshadow the significant role that snap judgment play in our daily life.Some times we don't have enough time to discuss or considerate the situation, and we need to make the decision in a short time. In this situation, the snap judgment maybe can help us overcome the difficulties. For example, when we driving, there will always be some careless drivers, sometimes they may cause the accidents, so when we face this, we need to do a snap judgment to decrease the harm. Because of these, the snap judgment can bring us many benefits. The snap judgment also connect with our usual habits, so if we have a good habits, we will make a good snap judgment. Such as the NBA player. We all know LBJ, a great basketball player, he always can save his team from the difficulties because the last decision he made before the time out. He has a good habit and which help him do a good snap judgment and which help him win the game. So the snap judgment may helpful sometimes. On the other hand, the snap judgment can response to some people's need that the careful consideration can't. For example, the when the soldier execute the task, there will be many situations, they can't do all plan to face every situation. So they need snap judgment and they must to trust the judgment. In this sense, the carefully judge can't meet the require and we need to trust the snap judgment. To sum up, based on the above analysis, we can see that, the snap judgment may have some drawbacks, but it can bring a great benefits to us, so I think it is wise to choose our stand, I can't agree with that snap judgments can never be trusted.