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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3100
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;能够使用一些简单的从句;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Certificate crazing? Yes,now so many younys come to college have a mind to own more and more certificates as many as they can. However,that is what reasons cause of this phenomenon. There is no suprise that so many college students are willing to get some certificates.Because diffierent students have diffierent purposes on certificate.Some do it for a job-hunting in one day,a few students because their love major,just want to know more about their profession,and even others just willing to kill the time. However,for me,no matter you do it for what ,if you think it is worth to do , you can be benefit of it in some day.

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