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Certificate crazing? Yes,now so many younys come to college have a mind to own more and more certificates as many as they can. However,that is what reasons cause of this phenomenon. There is no suprise that so many college students are willing to get some certificates.Because diffierent students have diffierent purposes on certificate.Some do it for a job-hunting in one day,a few students because their love major,just want to know more about their profession,and even others just willing to kill the time. However,for me,no matter you do it for what ,if you think it is worth to do , you can be benefit of it in some day.