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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3373
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题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

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200字以内

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作者词汇量积累不错,能较准确地使用学术词汇,单词拼写要仔细;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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With the rapid development of economy, especially the past 30 years of reform and opening up since 1978 . The quality of people's living standards and lifestyle has changed profoundly.Apparently, the range and the quality of food is not an exception. Nevertheless it soon becomes a controversial issue. some people regard it as an improvement while other believe the change is harmful. "There is no denying that much more extensive of food will benefit the balance of diet, which is helpful to healt . in 1950s , multitudes of people can not eat mealt frequently, let alone beaf, milk, etc . Moreover, it is feasible to eat other countries 's delicious food , which is of great benifit to culture communication. To sum up , the increase of the range and quality of food benifit to health As the proverb goes , No garden without weeds, some people argue that the change is harmful from other perspective . Two reasons as follows account for their views. Firstly , most of food are made by machine or like machine other than nature , like artificial eggs. Secondly , high energe food occupy a great proportion ,in addtion , people is addicted to them, which is harmful to health. As far as I am concerned , it indeed has both advantages and disadvantages as above. In summary ,what we should do is making best use of the advantage and bypass the shortcomings. Eat more widely to get more indispensable elements which is necessary to health and focus on the food we buy and the energy we gain Meanwhile.

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