2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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In our life,more and more people like online shopping .Of cuorst ,it is very convenient for people ,peolpe need not spend much time on shopping .And it has some problems.I think that people often buy some things which is useless in life. In personally ,I think that people need communicate with people ,if people always go shopping online ,they will not talk with people very often There are some my suggestions.First ,we should decrease the time of shopping online .Then ,we should often go out with friends .I think that it is very useful for us .so ,let us go out to learn some new things .,