高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；连词使用偏少。

Playing football is my favorite spot.I like playing football is cause of i picked up in the home way by chance.They beacuse interesting in football,i try to play football with friends unbelievable,It was not one day before enjoy the football. I frequently training and join in match.I try and win all the football game. My favorite football star is a English person who Bei Ke Hang Mu,my the biggest wish is famous of a professional football player.