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Playing football is my favorite spot.I like playing football is cause of I picked up in the home way by chance.They beacuse I interesting in football,i try to play football with friends. unbelievable,It was not one day before enjoy the football. I frequent train and join in lot of matchs.I try and win all the football game. My favorite football star is an English person who Bei Ke Hang Mu,my the biggest wish is famous of a professional football player.