高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；连词使用偏少。

Playing football is my favorite spot.I like playing football is cause of I picked up in the home way by chance. beacuse I interesting in football,I try to play football with friends. unbelievable,It was not one day before enjoy the football. I frequent train and join in lot of matches.I try and win all the football game. My favorite football star is an English person who Bei Ke Hang Mu,my the biggest wish is famous of a professional football player.