小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend have a pair of black eyes and white skin ,a long dark hair.he is tall and handsome.I like him very much.We always play together and do homework .We also get on with each other.I want to make friends with him for good. OK OK OK OK OKok O K OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK OK