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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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to: hubin@163.com from:KPOHsales@hotmail.com I'm so glad to said that last time i really know the porduce of new goods is No.5670 which so interesting in that, in Decemeber 15th ,in New York holding exhibition. In order to know about your company relation goods,please send us price list and instruction as soon as possible, so glad to your cooperation and we hope our be establish business relationship. Thank.
