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Playing football is my favorite spot.I like playing football is the cause of I picked up On the way home by chance. Because I interesting in football,I try to play football with friends. Unbelievable,It was not one day before enjoy the football. I often train and join a lot of matches.I manage and win all the football game. My favorite football star is an English person who Bei Ke Hang Mu,I the biggest wish Is known as a professional football player in the future.