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Memo To: Mary Chen From: Li Ming Re: New Year’s Party Date: December 23, 2008 It is the time again for the staff to have some activities to celebrate the New Year’s Day. I know you and some young guys have planned to hold an informal party. But I think we need do something different this year.I'm sorry to say that I will be in Beijing for a week, so it is up to you and the young guys to decide on the time and place of the party. Please let me know your final decision and whether I need do any preparation in advance. Yours, Li Ming