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Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. Which situade 500 metres far from Baishan Mountain entrance,Baishan Mountain Hotel has a splendid and natural scene,with numerous visitors be welcomed everyday.Room service is comfortably and specially arranged,which including twenty single rooms with the price of 100 Yuan per day,and fifteen double rooms with 150 Yuan per day,all rooms are provided by hot shower for twenty-four hours.Baishan Mountain Hotel also has dining hall supply both chinese and western-style foods,and coffee house where you can drink chinese tea or coffee as you prefer.The swimming pool inside the hotel opening for all day which free of charge.Reserve the service,and you will be always welcomed!