2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping With the development of world. Online shopping has become a fashion.There are many advertages of online shopping.At first, it makes our life much more convinient. we can buy anything we want at home.Second, the price online is often cheaper than a real store.Third, we can campare kinds of things then pick up the best one whitout long distence. so it not only saves times but also money. However, there are also some disadvertages about online shopping.First of all, it may be unsafe when we pay for .Second, it is easy to make us become curis about shopping which may make us waste a lot of money to buy sonething we need not really.so, in my viwes,we should think clearly what we going to buy when we shopping online. And try to scan the formal website to prevent cheatting.Last but is the most important, we should never tell someone else our password, that's really important.