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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17434
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Nowadays, technology develops so fast that every person can use it conveniently in any place. Computers have a more close relationship with human people.However, there are many kinds problems occur.Do computer really good for our life? I think it is wroth thinking. computer's function become more and more strong which contains games and recourses that are usefui to us. With computer people can enjoy their time by surfing internet and playing their favourite games.Sometimes ,people can have a rest in home and do not go outside to buy some goods, instead of buying this things by computer.We also use computer deal with some fails and pass them to somebody by using computer.In my opinion, I advice people to deal with their daily work.Only in this way can we inprove the work effiction. Meanwhile, we can protect our invironment . On the other hand, computer have a bad influence to people.There are many youths are addicted to games online which are bad for their health and study. Every coin has two sides.whatever computer is ,we should have a correct attitude towards computers.

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