2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；作者词汇多样性不足，但能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，但单词拼写的检查要加强；请注意分段。

Nowadays the computer has been an essential part in human's life. It improve the efficient of communicate with other peoples and realize informations in the world and so on. However, with the benifit it takes a lot of problems in many facets. like healthy many people spend lots of times in computers devote to feekble in their body as well as in the psychiraty facet.