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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1772
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题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇。

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On the important of name Name is a sign for a person, but though discussion we found different people has different idea on the important of name. Some people thought the name is important. First of all, with a name others can more easy to remember you . Second, some people’s name include their perents’ expect, such as Wang Gui, maybe his parent expects he will be rich. Last , from one’s name we can guess the character what the man has, for example, Li Jing, she might is claim girl. Of course some others thought the name unimportant. The reason is that we can though exchange to know some without name. meanwhile, what someone look like is a good way to remember them too. The opinion as I am concerned is the name is important for a man. Because someone will fell be respected if you known their name.

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