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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
The Good Habit of Saving Money When it comes to saving money, various opinions vary from person to person. Some people take it for granted that it is a good habit to save money. Others, however, argue that it is not necessary for us to save money because we don't lack of money. Weighing up tow ideas, I steadfastly believe that saving money is necessary for us. There are tow reason contributing to this issue. First, earning money is not easing. As a worker, we have to work hard to get award. As a student, we don't have the source of income other then ask for parents. For that we need to save money. Further more, saving money can improve our aility to handle our finances. If you do it, you will find that there are some money left in our daily life. With this money, you can use it to do what can rich youself. What has been discussed above , we may draw the conclusion that saving money is necessary for us.
