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Saving Money Is A Good Habit According to the recently survey, 67percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better. I'd like to save money. I think saving money is a good habit for college students. First at all, as a college student we don't have a lot of money and the original of our money is our parents. Our money are made from our parent's hard working. We should cherish it. Saving money is the good behavior to show our awareness of cherish. Besides, saving money can also improve our ability to make our money useful. For save money, we need to do a lot of plans that can improve our ability to use money. Last but not least, using tomorrow money today can cause deep stress for our college students if we can not afford it in the future and thus we should learn to save our money. In conclude, saving money is a good habit for college students. we should learn how to save money and make our money useful.
