初中英语命题作文真题演练(69):长大后

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Many people want to make their new ideas and wishes come true．They want to invent some new things for the world．I am one of them．I just want to be an inventor．Inventions can change the world．They can bring fun and happiness to our life．And our life will become better and better．Now I'm still a middle school student．I must try my best to work hard at my lessons and learn what my teachers teach us．I will use my inventions to make contribution to our country．