2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

with the development of internet,computers are used widely in people's life,just like people can't live without using it. you can see the computers used everywhere,shun as in hotel,school,market and so on.using computers can bring many advantages.people can get news without getting out,and they can see what they want to see.Moreover,people can buy things from internet instead of going the market.However,computer also can bring some bad effect, people always stay at home ,and they seldom have exercise,which is bad for their health.More seriously, people spend much time in playing computers ,as a result,they never have a talk to their families face to face,which is disturbing our relationship. In a word, we should use computers properly .and spend more time with our families.