2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Actions speak loud than worlds .As we all know ,a strong will is very important .It is the important guarantee of the successes .A man which has a strong will is able to make a great contribution .As a student ,we also need strong will ,if we do not study hard ,we should not be a useful man after all .In short ,nothing successes without a strong will ,so we should try our best to foster a strong will .