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题目要求：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.题目分析：
不能同意这个观点。商业的首要目的确实是盈利(profit-making)。但是任何企业团体作为社会的组成部分，有责任考虑到整个社会的利益(overall welfare of the society)，所以不能为所欲为(do whatever one wants to do; have one's own way; have [take] one's (full) swing; stop at nothing)。法制的必要性。作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
What is the goal of doing business for？Just for money or anything else,for example, making contribution to our society. As far as I can see, businesses shouldn't do anything they can to make a profit and the opinion about the businesses should do is absolutely ignorance and ridiculous. On one hand, the goals of doing business are not only for making benefits but also for making contribution to our communities,to our countries and to our society, so doing anything to make interests,in terms of businesses,is ignorance.It is easy to find out plenty of successful businessmen who don't do anything to make a profit. Bill Gates, the richest man in the world and one of the founders of the biggest and one of the most successful technology companies-Microsoft-in the world, gave up his wildly successful job to throw himself into charity,it is a paradigm for the view-doing something to help the people needed help is more important and more meaningful to make a profit,so businesses should not do anything they can to make a profit. On the other hand, if a man did whatever he can do to make interests,he might easily go to a wrong way. We have known many scandals about businessmen to make interests without scruple, for example corruption,tax evasion and even doing something that jeopardizes the peaceful of the regions.For example, Liu Han, a famous China's business and the richest man in Shi Chuan province, was convicted for corruption, jeopardizing others deliberately,which is a lesson for those doing anything for money. Admittedly, the primary purpose for business is making a profit, however, if there are existing some conflicts about making interests,for example, the benefits of our society, the way to make interests may violate the laws and regulations, what we should do is to give up the principle of making interests. To conclude, business should not do anything they can to make a profit.
