2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细。

The Way to Success Everyone is affectional of success ,but not all of us will be successed .Do you know how to success ? The answers are so much and different .Someone believes that it is the luck. My opinions are hard work ,insistence and luck. I think the first two are more important than the laster.There are some reasons for it. First ,if we hard work ,we would learnof much of knowledge ,and as soon as we have the oportunities and we could catch it and use it to finish our object . Second ,only insistend to keep our dream and hard work ,we may reach the grade that we wish to be . Finally ,only hard work and insistence will take the luck to us ,if not posse them that the luck may not be the luck. In all of them , I am insistent to believe that if you have hard work and insistence that you will have the luck and success.