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The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the important national festivals in China. It was been founded to be honor of a man who was a distinguished poet-QUYuan. Thousands years ago, QUYUAN was an officer in Chu. His king believed some rumors and began to be skeptical of his loyalty. It made QuYuan extremely gloom,as a result, in order to elaborate his loyalty, QuYuan chosen suicide by sinking NiLuo River. The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrate on May 5 of lunar calender every year. There are various ways to celebrate it. From food, people will eat ZongZi, which is a food containing rice, bean, meat, egg and others. In some places, people also eat salt eggs which means health, safety. From activities, the most distinctive activity is the competition of Dragon Boat. At other place, the young will wash the feet of the pension showing care, respect. In all words, the Dragon Boat Festival is tremendously famous and there are all kinds of activities and good bless.