2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

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As time goes by ,the internet plays an important role in our life.people work with the computer,students can learn more new things on the internet ,and some people can make friends or go shopping by surfing on the internet .Although ,the intrenet is very helpful for us ,there are some disadvantages.More and more students like playing the computer games ,so ,they spend more and more time on the games,it can make great influence. on their study ,also ,it is bad for their eyes .so,I think that stuents should make good use of time .At last ,I want to show some opinion of the internet.In our life, we can not live well without the internet.on the other hands,we should make good use of the internet .