2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

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along with the wide application of internet in connecting with others, there is a growing tendency for most people to make friends online. some teenagers prefer to make friends online since it takes fewer time and makes more friends in the internet. however, as far as i am concerned, we cannot be blind to the problems it may attribute to though it has many obvious advantages so i don't think it is wide enough to make friends online. it is unwise to make friends online and there are two justifications listed to support my idea. firstly, the friends online are not as reliable as those in real life. we learn about our friends made online just through the internet so it's hard for us to judge whether their words are true or not. lacking of detailed understanding of each other stop us to trust our friends completely. secondly, making friends online is sometime a threat to both our bodies and belongings. it is reported that an increasing number of criminals are committing crimes though making friends online. to sum up, despite there are many positive aspects of making friends online, it still unwise to make friends online.