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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As the note shows that the higher education you have,the much more money you will earn.It reffers to tell us the importance of education .whats more ,the unemployment rate will get lower with the higher education you have take,then the number of people is decreasing with the education level improving
