高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

My town is the biggest economic city of china-shanghai. The four seasons is distinct.There are all kinds of flowes in spring. In summer, the weather is very hot and is highly humidity, so people will be feel uncomfortable.Previously, people will stay outdoors in the evening for cool and talk about with eatch other. Now people will stay in an air-conditioned room to enjoy the cool, but they also lost the opportunity to chat with their neighbors. Autumn is a busy season. For living in the city's people , their pace of life is very fast, and their pressure of life is very big also. Winter is a cold and dry season, people will be prepared for the Spring Festival. This is my hometown, i live and grow here ,i love her.