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The Gragon Boat Festival is one of the important national festival in china,the same as the Spring Festival,Middle autumn Festival.It is a traditional Festival that all Chinese will celebrate it in all kinds of way. When I was young,I know that the Gragon Boat Festival is to memory QuYuan who jumped into the river because he wanted to express his angry to those hypocrisy people.What's more,People usually get together to eat Zongzi and watch movies at night.The most interesting activity is that they will hold a boat test or some games about water,And the winer will get a lot of gifts,such as foods or little things so it is really fun!For most of the students,the other fun is that we will be off class for nearly two days and we can enjoy the warm day with our best friends. From what I said,we can easily draw a conclusion that the Gragon Boat Festival is meanful to Chinese people,and we enjoy a lot from it,The most important is that will observe it forever.
