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The Gragon Boat Festival is one of the important festival in china,the same as the Spring Festival,Mid-Autumn Festival and Tomb-sweeping Day. It was celebrated by When I was young,I know that the Gragon Boat Festival is to memory QuYuan who jumped into the river because he wanted to oppose to those villains.Another tradition is that People usually get together to eat Zongzi .People who mourned the death of Qu threw Zong zi into the river to feed his ghost every year and watch movies at night.In fact,the most popular activity is that people will hold a dragon-boat racing which symbolize people's attempts to rescue Qu Yuan or some games which played in water,And the winner will get a lot of gifts,such as foods or little things so it is really fun! While for most of the students,the other fun is that we will be off class for nearly two days and we can enjoy the warm day with our best friends. With the changes of the times, the memorial turns to be a time for protection from evil and disease for the rest of year. People will hang healthy herbs on the front door to clear the bad luck of the house. Although the significance of the festival might be different with the past, it still gives the observer an opportunity to glimpse a part of the rich Chinese cultural herita
