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On Excessive Packaging Nowadays, there are many goods have the atmosphere on over packaging in our life. With the development of our life, people have more consciousness in eating healthy. So that the atmosphere of excessive packaging are rising. As far as I'm concerned, the reason why this atmosphere happen is that we want to have healthy food and excessive packaging can make food colorful. But from my perspective, on one hands, it's unnecessary for us to have the food excessive packaging. The material of the package mainy made up of plastic which not only can lead to air pollution when it is made, but also lead to white pollution after we used. On the other hands, excessive packaging will increase the price of food we buy which will increase our burden. As the famous saying goes, "No garden is without weeds." Although the packaging can make our food much cleaner, the excessive packaging wii lead to white pollution. What we should do to prevent excessive packaging is that we should refused to white pollution and refuse to excessive packaging. Only in this way can we have a better tomorrow, a no pollution of tomorrow.
