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北京丰台区2013届九年级上学期期末试卷英语作文:写信

发布时间:2013-05-15 17:55浏览次数:1435
要求:
根据中文大意和英文提示词语, 写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出, 其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假设你是Peter, 你的笔友李华最近很不开心, 下面是你收到的他的电子邮件。请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信。针对他的问题, 谈谈你的看法, 同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。

 Dear Peter,
  Thanks for your letter. I am really unhappy these days because I didn’t pass the English exam. I often find it hard to understand reading materials. I think maybe it’s because there are so many difficult words in them and I seldom read English after class. Besides, some materials are really boring for me.
    What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions?
    Yours,
    Li Hua

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 Dear Li Hua,
  I’m sorry to hear that you’re unhappy now. ______________________________________

    I hope what I said can help you.
    Yours,
    Peter

用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear that you’re unhappy now. bur the people suppose to calm down and happy every day.so,Iwil as quickly as i could help you.I ever managed to study English well,I succes because I fall in love with English. There are some ideas for you.Frist,you could frequently listen to English music and watch English movie,you will gradually find your spoken English and listening become better,and interesting in English.Second,You have to Memorizing words every morning. I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Peter

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