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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(21):联谊活动

发布时间:2014-03-27 17:11浏览次数:408
要求:

假设你是某中学学生会主席李华,你校与本地一所国际学样经常举办联谊活动.你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人,拟邀请国际学校的学生参加,请你根据以下内容要点给国际学样的学生会主席Tony写一封信.
要点:向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡……);
为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天……);
为老人表演节目(唱歌、跳舞……).
注意:

1、词数为100左右;
2、信的开关和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);
3、已给出的信的开关和结尾不得抄入答题卡.
(以下所给内容不得抄入答题卡)
Dear Tony,
Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, is coming around. We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day, and we would like to invite students from your school to join us.

Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

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评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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We have prepared some gifts such as flowers and self-made cards for those old people whom we will present these gifts to.Then we will do some jobs at the Nusing Home to help old people,like room cleaning、washing、or chat with some of them who are eager to,etc。For those lonely and humdrum old people,we will entertain them with our carefully prepared programs including dance and sing,I'm sure they will enjoy that. This activity will be very significant for both of us to learn the meaning of Chongyang,we welcome you to join us.

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