高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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It is very important manner that in the contrary.Therefor,It is imperative to improve the china people manner.In recent days, my class have dissus for this topic. I think manner is necessaried refact,But,a lot of people don't refact.Such as,some people often dropps little on poupose,Some people write or paint in a wall.Most of people have a wrost habit,If they don't find policeman,they would casually pick the flowers. It's obvious that this thing is wrong.