拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
It is very important that manner in the international community.Therefore,It is imperative to improve chinese manner.In recent days, my class has discuss for this topic. I think manner ought to is respected.But,a lot of people don't respect.Such as,some people often drops little on purpose,Some people write or paint in a wall.Most of the people have a bad habit,If they don't find policeman,they would casually pick the flowers. It's obvious that this thing is wrong.