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Nowadays,the Internet plays an important part in people's life,it is widely used by people.shun as watching films ,playing games and communicating with people. Because the using of the Internet ,it become more and more convenient to people to communicate .we can chat in everywhere and every time,which can deepen our feeling.Besides, we can see someone who is not in our sight, and talk with them at any time with the Internet.However,the Internet also can make a bad effect in our communication.For example,we always have not a talk face to face with our parents and friends.As a result,we can know their real feeling and we can't share their happiness right now. In a word,The Internet have two sides in people's communication.As we can handle properly, it will make a benefit for us.
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