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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5301
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;有效的运用了一些复杂句。

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This has led to a hot issue that whether college students should hire cleaners. Certainly,people have different ideas, some hold that students should not hire cleaners . Nevertheless,other people definitely stand an opposing side. From my angle, I set forth that the former is express my though. There are some factor to contribute to my mind. At first, we need to talk about the source of college students' money, generally speaking, which most come from parents. Earning money is not easy for most parents,as a result, what is the reason that using parents' money enjoys high level life? The other aspect, Steve Jobs who is the founder of Apple company said think big,and do small. Nowadays, "That is not fit for me, I am an intellectual for big things"has becoming a phrase for students. However, if you are unwilling to do a small thing,how can you have ability like perseverance,diligence to face the difficulty of big things? Taking all factors analyzed above into account, we can draw a conclusion that do laundry and cleaning not just saves money, but trains our all kinds of qualities. Hence, not hiring cleaner is a mutual-benefit thing.

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