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This has led to a hot issue that whether college students should hire cleaners. Certainly,people have different ideas, some hold that students should not hire cleaners . Nevertheless,other people definitely stand an opposing side. From my angle, I set forth that the former is express my though. There are some factor to contribute to my mind. At first, we need to talk about the source of college students' money, generally speaking, which most come from parents. Earning money is not easy for most parents,as a result, what is the reason that using parents' money enjoys high level life? The other aspect, Steve Jobs who is the founder of Apple company said think big,and do small. Nowadays, "That is not fit for me, I am an intellectual for big things"has becoming a phrase for students. However, if you are unwilling to do a small thing,how can you have ability like perseverance,diligence to face the difficulty of big things? Taking all factors analyzed above into account, we can draw a conclusion that do laundry and cleaning not just saves money, but trains our all kinds of qualities. Hence, not hiring cleaner is a mutual-benefit thing.