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to： c.c ： subject：Liming This Sunday,the class committee plan to go to Zhongshan Park.And we want to invite you to join us.We all meet at the gate of the school.And leave at 7:00 by bus.The activities schedual as follows.We have a English party and take photos in the morning.And we have lunch at noon.After that,we boating,swimming,water-skiing and playing games in the afternoon.At last,we return at 4:30pm.Really expecting you can come.
