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to c.c subject I'm li Ming rong, do you have any plans for the weekend, I'm planning to organize an activity, in this Sunday to visit gulangyu, activity time is at eight o 'clock in the morning on the ferry, to the gulangyu, visit for a walk after dinner together at noon, afternoon free activities, at the end of the 4 o 'clock in the afternoon. Looking forward to you can come.