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to c.c subject Liming I'm li Ming rong, do you have any plans for the weekend, I'm planning to organize an activity, in this Sunday to visit gulangyu, activity time is at eight o 'clock in the morning on the ferry, to the gulangyu, visit for a walk after dinner together at noon, afternoon free activities, at the end of the 4 o 'clock in the afternoon. Looking forward to you can come.
