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Almost of us aspire to America because the life performed at American movie is comfortable and luxurious. They have themselves villa, private car, satisfied job and so on. But in my talk, I just want to say that American is not the really paradise people expected. Well, I am not a politician, I can not use the terminology to explain the problem in the US. I just say that some American don't have house to live because they don't have enough money to pay for it. Why do they lack money? Are they lazy? The obvious answer is no. There are many reasons result to this consequence, but in my view there two mainly reason contributing to it. First, the American economy tends to depress, unemployment reaches new levels, which result to workers' income decreasing.Further, there is a growing gap between rich and poor. With the development of science and technology, executive get huge profits while ordinary beings and workers who didn't have professional education earn less than less. That is the reason why more and more American can't afford the house.
