2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误。

Different people have different views on the definition of success,but their ways to success are similar:it all calls for deligent and persistence. As we all know ,nothing will be smooth from the beginning to the end,so persistence is crucial for one person be a successful man or a failure man.Persistence means that we need to face to the failures and never give up.Once you set your goal,there is no excuse to prevent you from going ahead. The other factors determined whether you can success is deligence.Talents actually exisit,however they are the minority among the people who are successful.The mostly part of them are deligent.They treasure time and regard every second as their life.